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You look at me,
And you see life,
Happiness balenced,
On the point of a knife

If i lean any way,
I will fall,
To my death,
The ravens call.

The dark abyss,
Which lies below,
It is now stronger,
And continues to grow.

The wind starts to howl,
But i hold my ground,
And hang onto this life,
By which I am bound.

The weight pushes down,
The knife's through my feet,
I have to jump now,
And accept my defeat....
i like to write poetry. i wrote it in about 45 minutes.. ish.. i'm not really sure how long it took me. lol
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WhySoSerious97 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O my God I love this! I love to write poetry to but I could never be this good.
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hippieinblack Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student General Artist
well thanks!!! hahahaha
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